I’m working on a hand-lettered personal logotype for my portfolio. My personal view of design is a mix of architectural elements/structure and a Marian Bantjes-ish philosophy about creating interest and surprise. Not to mention my interest in typography and hand lettering. Feedback on the rough?

I’m working on a hand-lettered personal logotype for my portfolio. My personal view of design is a mix of architectural elements/structure and a Marian Bantjes-ish philosophy about creating interest and surprise. Not to mention my interest in typography and hand lettering. Feedback on the rough?